Computers are being used more and more in education. Some people say that this is a positive trend, while others argue that it is leading to negative consequences. Discuss both sides of this argument and then give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Currently, with the development of technology, the

use

of electric devices is

apllied

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applied

in many fields of life, especially the

use

of

computers

in

education

. Some people think that has many

benefit

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for

students

and teachers,

while

other think that has negative effects on

students

. In

this

essay, both views will be discussed to get a comprehensive view

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this

issue. The application of

computers

in

education

will bring us many benefits.

Firstly

, it can create interesting lessons that capture

learners

' attention. Teachers can illustrate the lesson to attract the attention of the

learners

.

Accordingly

,

learners

will be more interested in the lesson content and actively participate in lesson development, especially online learning.

Secondly

, it

also

creates

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conditions for particular

students

, who have difficulty with traditional forms of

education

,

for example

, people who have difficulty writing letters, auditory

learners

, visual

learners

and people with communication difficulties.

Computers

will assist them to learn and understand the lectures better.

Moreover

,

computers

also

help us strengthen connections, promote collaboration, and build teams. With technology in the classroom, it's easier than ever to connect and do assignments between groups of

learners

.

On the other hand

,

computers

also

bring us negative influences.

Students

are easily distracted and lose focus when they

use

computers

.

Learners

have access to the Internet right in the classroom which makes them easily distracted by games, social networks, advertisements, etc. When

students

use

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the computer

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computer

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computers

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too much, it may harm

for

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their health.

In addition

, it

also

has its limitations

such

as cheating in exams, expensive cost, limited ability to communicate,

social

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and social

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interaction. In conclusion, the application of

computers

in

education

has both sides. In my

opion

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opinion

, we should apply

computers

in

education

beacause

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because

of their benefits but

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student

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students

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must

use

them properly to avoid their negative effects.