Computers are being used more and more in education. Some people say that this is a positive trend, while others argue that it is leading to negative consequences. Discuss both sides of this argument and then give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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Currently, with the development of technology, the
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other think that has negative effects on
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issue. The application of
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will bring us many benefits.
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, it can create interesting lessons that capture
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' attention. Teachers can illustrate the lesson to attract the attention of the
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will be more interested in the lesson content and actively participate in lesson development, especially online learning.
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creates
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conditions for particular
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, who have difficulty with traditional forms of
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, people who have difficulty writing letters, auditory
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and people with communication difficulties.
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will assist them to learn and understand the lectures better.
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help us strengthen connections, promote collaboration, and build teams. With technology in the classroom, it's easier than ever to connect and do assignments between groups of
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bring us negative influences.
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are easily distracted and lose focus when they
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computers
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have access to the Internet right in the classroom which makes them easily distracted by games, social networks, advertisements, etc. When
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too much, it may harm
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their health.
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, it
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has its limitations
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as cheating in exams, expensive cost, limited ability to communicate,
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interaction. In conclusion, the application of
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has both sides. In my
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because
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must
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them properly to avoid their negative effects.
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