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Computers are being used more and more in education. Some people say that this is a positive trend, while others argue that it is leading to negative consequences. Discuss both sides of this argument and then give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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In education,
computer
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computers
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 are being widely used to teach
students
 in many
school
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schools
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. Some people say that using
computer
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a computer
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 in education is necessary, but others say that
computers
 should not be used because it adversely affects
students
. In terms of benefits, the use of
computers
 in education is that it helps
students
 know how the
computer
 works, how to program the system and know about the information of the world.
Students
 can use
computers
 to study online,
chat
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and chat
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 with friends to solve
the
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homework,
in addition
, they can
also
 search for information about
the
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other countries,
recipes
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and recipes
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,… on google.
On the other hand
,
computers
 are
also
 not entirely beneficial. Using
computer
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a computer
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 for too long can lead to
eyes
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 diseases
such
 as myopia,
it
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and it
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 can
also
 cause insomnia if you watch
computer
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the computer
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 before
bed time
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bedtime
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.
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The computer
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Computer
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Computers
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also
make
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makes
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 users addicted to social networks, they will always spend a lot of time
to watch
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watching
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 tik tok,
facebook
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Facebook
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 and forget what they need to do. In short, whether using a
computer
 is beneficial or harmful depends on how people use it, we need to know how to
seclet
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select
 the good content and avoid
from
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apply
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bad content or ads.
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    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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