We live in a world in which we are constantly exposed to advertising. To what extent does advertising influence our choices as consumers, and what effect does it have on our lifestyles? Discuss this issue and give your opinion.

In
this
contemporary era,we are surrounded
with
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different types of
advertisement
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advertisements
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. From waking up from bed to
sleeping
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at night, we are constantly watching
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the advertisement
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advertisement
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advertisements
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of
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for
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different
products
.
This
essay believes that customer
choices
are regularly influenced by
advertisement
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advertisements
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besides
effecting
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affecting
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our
lifestyles
in a great way. At present, most of our
choices
are influenced
due to
advertising. We are keen to buy the
products
which are displayed before our eyes in an attractive way.
For instance
, if we see any
products
which will help us to make our life easy and better, we do not think too much before buying
that
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that product
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products
.
Moreover
,
advertisement
helps people to understand more about the
products
, about
it's
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usefullness
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usefulness
and so on which  eventually influences our
choices
.
Besides
,through
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advertisements
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advertisement
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we can about lots of information about those
products
and what type of material is used for those
products
.
Besides
, influencing
over
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choices
,
advertisement
plays an important role
on
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in
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our
lifestyles
.
For example
,  if we want to buy any
products
we ought to make some changes in our lifestyle in order to save money.
Furthermore
, the
products
helps
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us to make our life easy and comfortable. Without
advertisement
, we could not know about
different
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types of machinery which
is
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made to make our life smooth. All in all,
advertisement
not only influences our
choices
as buyers but
also
affects our
lifestyles
to a great extent. Through
advertisement
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we can know about different
products
which
influences
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influence
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our
choices
by showing
its
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their
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advantages and making our
lifestyles
easy by using that product .
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