We live in a world in which we are constantly exposed to advertising. To what extent does advertising influence our choices as consumers, and what effect does it have on our lifestyles? Discuss this issue and give your opinion.

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contemporary era,we are surrounded
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different types of
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advertisement
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advertisements
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. From waking up from bed to
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at night, we are constantly watching
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the advertisement
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advertisement
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advertisements
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of
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different
products
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.
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essay believes that customer
choices
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are regularly influenced by
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advertisement
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advertisements
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besides
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effecting
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affecting
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our
lifestyles
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in a great way. At present, most of our
choices
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are influenced
due to
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advertising. We are keen to buy the
products
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which are displayed before our eyes in an attractive way.
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, if we see any
products
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which will help us to make our life easy and better, we do not think too much before buying
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that product
those products
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products
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,
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helps people to understand more about the
products
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, about
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usefullness
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usefulness
and so on which  eventually influences our
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.
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,through
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advertisements
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advertisement
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we can about lots of information about those
products
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and what type of material is used for those
products
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.
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, influencing
over
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choices
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,
advertisement
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plays an important role
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in
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our
lifestyles
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.
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,  if we want to buy any
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we ought to make some changes in our lifestyle in order to save money.
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, the
products
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helps
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us to make our life easy and comfortable. Without
advertisement
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, we could not know about
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types of machinery which
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made to make our life smooth. All in all,
advertisement
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not only influences our
choices
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as buyers but
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affects our
lifestyles
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to a great extent. Through
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advertisement
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we can know about different
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which
influences
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influence
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our
choices
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by showing
its
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their
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advantages and making our
lifestyles
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easy by using that product .
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