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Write a letter to your neighbor (who is also your friend) about the damage that occurs to your car while he parks his car in the space allotted to you. In the letter, you should: Describe the damage Say how you feel about this problem. Suggest on actions he should take.

#neighbor #friend #damage #car #parks #space #actions
Dear Roger, I hope
this
 letter finds you well. I am so sorry to have to order it
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 you, but we have to discuss
about
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the damage which you caused to my car when you were parking. As you know, because it was a gift from my father, I have a real love for my car and I would like to preserve it as
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 as possible. After the matter happened, I went there to check the damage and saw that there was a large scratch on its painting
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 the right side, on the door. Since I saw that, my heart is feeling sad because I have a great sentimental value for
this
 car. Knowing you, I believe that you
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 feel sad about it, so I want to propose that you take my vehicle to a place to fix it. Probably will be an affordable service because will be necessary to paint only one door. Looking forward to hearing from you what do you think, Best wishes, Franklin.
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