Your Next Door neighbor often listens to loud music late at night. Because of the loud music , you often have problems sleeping. Write a letter to the authority of the building. In your letter Describe the situation Explain the problems it is causing you. Propose a solution to the problem

Dear building manager I am
the
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resident of your building and my apartment number is 302. The people living in 303 often play very
lound
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loud
rock music even
in
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midnight
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the midnight
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. I can hear it clearly in my
bed room
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bedroom
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, which makes me can not fall asleep no matter how
tierd
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tired
tyred
I am. Because of that, I am always sleepy during
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the daytime
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and do not have enough energy to study
on
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the
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class. I already failed my
last
quiz. I already talked with him about
this
situation and it still can not be solved. Could you try to contact
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him or write him a letter to let him know how badly his
behivours
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behaviours
behaviour
will influence his
neighbor
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in
this
building? I believe that he will stop doing that if he got a notice from you. Thank you so much kind regards
kim
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Structure your letter

A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:

  • A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
  • The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
  • A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)

When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.

All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.

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