Scientists and technlogy experts seem to be more valued by modern society than musicians and artists. To what extent do you agree?

Recent development in

society

can be attributed to the advancement of science and technology. Even though music is an intrinsic part of our

society

, in the 21st century, people have put more focus on science.

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essay focuses on two key features that aspire people to become experts in science than arts; the first is the monetary gain and the second is the ease of usage.

Firstly

, human

society

runs on money. It is imperative that when

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young adult goes out in

society

they can earn well.

Furthermore

, in the currently available ,market there are far more jobs in the STEM field compared to any other.

This

demand in scientific fields

also

translates to higher paying jobs, for ,example doctors earn an average of 80k AUD from the start , in Australia. But compared to that, an unestablished musician

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less than 30K AUD annually. Technology has made it easier to live life with greater comfort in general for human beings. Communications across the world are possible

due to

inventions

such

as the mobile phone. Plus the development of artificial intelligence has enabled the advancement of visual arts making human artists redundant. A recent study, from Melbourne university, made a prediction that AI will replace humans in the artistic world by the 22nd century.

To conclude

, technological experts are needed more in modern

society

and

hence

are well-paid and respected. Even though

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talented artists like Koren's band BTS are well respected and have a high income, they are few and far between. In my opinion, it is only natural that people will respect scientists more

instead

of artists.