You saw an advert in the newspaper asking for volunteers to help run a charity event Write a letter of application to the organizers. In your letter: 1.Explain why you are interested in helping 2.Give details on suitable past experience 3. Suggest ways you might help with the event

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing with regard to an opportunity of being a volunteer at the "All against Cancer Party" which interests me to take part. Since I work as
cleanner
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cleaner
cleanser
two years now, I am sending my application to work
in
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this
event because it is obvious that once it will be hold at the main restaurant of the town, it will be so many to clean there
such
as the lobby, the
cousine
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cuisine
,
restroons
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restrooms
, etc.
Hence
, many staff to make sure all is clean before, during and
in
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the end of
this
gathering will be needed. At
this
moment, I am the head of a
cleanners
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cleaners
team in the City Shopping Mall and I am in charge of
check
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if all the stores are spotless before it opens.
However
, I used to be the person who cleaned
this
place earlier. My job was to
mope
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the floor, take out the rubbish and clean restrooms until a promotion have been given to me.
Furthermore
, I am sure that I could not only assist the cleaners
dividing
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tasks with them but
also
keep the floor clean
while
the party happens, as I can mope in a record time. Please let me know if
this
spot is still available
that
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and
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I will be pleased to volunteer. I look forward to hearing from you at
earliest
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, Yours faithfully, Pollyanna Souza
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