You saw an advert in the newspaper asking for volunteers to help run a charity event Write a letter of application to the organizers. In your letter: 1.Explain why you are interested in helping 2.Give details on suitable past experience 3. Suggest ways you might help with the event

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing with regard to an opportunity of being a volunteer at the "All against Cancer Party" which interests me to take part. Since I work as

cleanner

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cleaner

cleanser

two years now, I am sending my application to work

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this

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event because it is obvious that once it will be hold at the main restaurant of the town, it will be so many to clean there

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as the lobby, the

cousine

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cuisine

restroons

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restrooms

, etc.

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, many staff to make sure all is clean before, during and

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the end of

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gathering will be needed. At

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moment, I am the head of a

cleanners

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cleaners

team in the City Shopping Mall and I am in charge of

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if all the stores are spotless before it opens.

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, I used to be the person who cleaned

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place earlier. My job was to

mope

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the floor, take out the rubbish and clean restrooms until a promotion have been given to me.

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, I am sure that I could not only assist the cleaners

dividing

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in dividing

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tasks with them but

also

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keep the floor clean

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the party happens, as I can mope in a record time. Please let me know if

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spot is still available

that

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and

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I will be pleased to volunteer. I look forward to hearing from you at

earliest

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your earliest

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, Yours faithfully, Pollyanna Souza

pollyannamsouzaMon Jan 30 2023

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

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Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

230 words

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