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Writing Samples
Band 4.5

Recently you saw an article in a newspaper/journal about city/town you know and some of the information in the artice was incorrect. Write a letter to the editor regarding this. In your letter, you should tell: - how you know about this city/town - what information was incorrect - what the editior should do about this

Dear Mr. or Ms, My name is Patryk and I am writing to your
magazazine
Correct your spelling
magazine
, I just saw an article about my hometown - New Orlean. I
born
Add a missing verb
was born
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 there and spend
Correct pronoun usage
my chilchood
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chilchood
Correct your spelling
childhood
 and
teenagers
Replace the word
teenage
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 time.
This
Linking Words
 city is amazing I really like coming back there. One
information
Correct quantifier usage
piece of information
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 about
town
Correct article usage
the town
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 is incorrect. The journalist wrote about the smaller wooden church. The New Orlean have for sure two
church's
Change the noun form
churches
church
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. In the magazine is information about
Use synonyms
fire
Correct article usage
the fire
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 in 1985 May,
that
Correct word choice
but that
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 information is incorrect. My dad was a fireman and he was been on
this
Linking Words
 action. The
fire
Use synonyms
 was
in
Change preposition
on
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 5th July, plenty of people
helping
Wrong verb form
helped
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 in the
fire
Use synonyms
 and
than
Replace the word
then
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 in
Correct article usage
the rebulding
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rebulding
Correct your spelling
rebuilding
building
 church. I have an idea and propose, my
dad
Add the comma(s)
,dad
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 wanna tell more about that
teribble
Correct your spelling
terrible
fire
Use synonyms
. It would be nice if you want correct
mistake
Correct article usage
the mistake
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 and write more about
fire
Use synonyms
 in the next magazine. Here is my phone
numbe
Correct your spelling
number
: 777-777-777, you can contact me and we talk about
date
Add an article
the date
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. Thank you in advance, Patryk

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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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