In many countries, the quality of life in the large cities is becoming worse. What causes this problem? What measure can be taken to solve it?

Many years ago, living in a big town was synonymous with well-being because of the structure offered to its residents.
However
, as the urban population increased significantly, the issues have a sharp growth as well. In many parts of the world, there are many
people
complaining about the problems of living in a big city.
This
essay will look at the reasons for
this
and propose some solutions. One of the main causes of
this
problem
is that urban areas
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always busy,
hence
residents face traffic jam every day.
That is
to say, much time is spent in the car and it becomes worse in rush hours. To tackle
this
matter, the authorities would offer
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reliable and efficient transport which crossed
all
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the city
with
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a fair price. In order to reduce the
amount
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of cars on the streets. Another
problem
is that metropolis tend to have all establishments busy,
such
as banks, hospitals and others services. To be more precise, the space planning
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most
of
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activities
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do not
followed
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the increased
number
of users,
for
this
reason
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enormous line are formed in
this
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places and the
number
of employees eventually is
unsuficient
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insufficient
. In order to offer a smart and fast service to citizens, the IT department from the Town Hall should develop
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app including all demanding services and information which
people
could solve at home without facing crowded places.
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this
way, the
number
of
people
circulating in central areas could be
also
reduced.
To sum up
, huge cities are not offering
quality
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of life to their residents. Most
of
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urban
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the urban
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area
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are facing busy services and traffic too.
This
is
serious
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problem
and unless authorities work
torwards
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towards
to reduce the
number
of
people
circulating, it will impact a lot in daily life. My view is that the
responsability
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responsibility
for solving
this
problem
lies with the authorities.
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