Some people think parents should supervise their children’s activities closely, while others believe children should have more freedom. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In today's society, there are many opinions in terms of

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-rearing and

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, some believe that

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should be supervised closely,

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others believe that

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benefit from being able to play more independently. In

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essay, I will discuss both sides and give my opinion.

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,

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from an adult is an important part of insuring that a

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is performing an activity safely,

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thinking is not yet fully developed until the age of 21.

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need guidance and support to grow and develop to understand society and the world around them.

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, morals and social interactions are important life skills that can be difficult for a

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to understand without the support of a grown-up.

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, if a

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sees a toy that another

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is playing with that looks interesting to them, they are most likely going to snatch the toy from the other

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, without reflecting on the reaction. In situations like

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guidance from a parent or teacher, is needed.

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, the

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might grow up to believe it is okay to take what you want without considering others.

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, too much

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might

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impact a

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’s independence and hinder their development. With that I mean, if an adult constantly interferes and corrects the way a

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is playing or performing an activity, their sense of autonomy, and skills

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as; problem-solving, creativity, and imagination might be affected.

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, if a

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is practising dressing themselves, and the adult constantly adjusts and changes the clothes, the

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is going to end up feeling like their attempts and decisions don’t matter in the end. In conclusion, my opinion is that

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most certainly need

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and guidance to stay safe and grow in new unfamiliar situations.

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,

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need space to explore and be able to form their own identities and personality. I believe that supervising should be done in a way that respects the

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’s autonomy.