Many people believe that international tourism is a bad thing for their countries. What are the reasons for this? What can be done to change this negative attitude towards international tourism?

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It is said that tourism is the main way of earning money for some
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,it has some cons for other
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.I consider that it has more upsides than downsides.
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,in the modern,era
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are excited about travelling.Now you can go everywhere.All you have to do is buy the ticket and book a hotel.
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economy of well-known
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rocket fastly.In my opinion,there are a few things that help us to develop:alcohol,cigarettes,drugs and travelling.From that list travelling is the most harmless.
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,not all
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know how to behave in other
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.Some of them through trash on the streets,which is disgusting.First of,all you have to be responsible not only in your motherland but of course in other
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.Travellers must be aware of the law and know the consequences of their actions.
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,international tourism assists popular
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,what about others who are less known?
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start to forget about small
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which are less engaging for them.It causes lots of problems.Customs and traditions start to be forgotten.
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people
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begin to be disrespectful to the traditions of forgotten
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.In my opinion
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the main reason why habitats of unknown counties start to hate international travelling.That just causes the death of their own culture.From my point of,view the only way how do deal with that problem is to show the beauty of all cultures,especially the small ones.After that
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start to visit them. In conclusion,travelling is a good thing to some point.
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,
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have to understand the value of their own customs and traditions of our ancient
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • sustainable tourism
  • cultural preservation
  • economic disparity
  • local communities
  • environmental impact
  • overcrowding
  • infrastructure
  • responsible tourist
  • revenue distribution
  • marketing campaign
  • community engagement
  • littering
  • overuse of resources
  • cultural appreciation
  • health risks
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