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Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter – explain why you changed jobs – describe your new job – tell him/her your other news

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Dear John, I am writing to let you know that I
finally
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 got a Software Engineer position
in
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 Google. I am so happy to share
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 news with you. As I told you earlier, my previous job was so
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to
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 me. I kept working on fixing
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 bugs
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 an existing system.
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 I started seeking new job opportunities 2 months ago.
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 I walked
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 Google’s office during my first interview, I immediately knew that
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work place
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. My major responsibility is tuning search results on several
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Google’s
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 products. The most exciting thing is that my supervisor is a pioneer in
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 area around the world. I believe that I can get enormous cutting-edge knowledge from him.
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, I have bought a new house near my office. I sincerely invite you to come to visit next month if you are free at that point
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 time. With best wishes, Michael
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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