In recent years, the family structure has changed, as well as family roles. What are the changes occurring? Do you think these changes are positive or negative?

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During several decades, the family structures and roles of family members have varied as much as the

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has. The essay below will discuss these differences and my evaluation of the circumstance. First of all, in general, the size of a family has decreased,

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all members of a family play different roles, compared to the past

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, a few decades ago, married couples in South Korea used to serve their grandparents, parents, and their children.

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, more and more individuals become independent of

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and live only with their children.

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, sometimes there are families without spouses nor a child.

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, different from the past, not only does a father work, but all members of a family do, and males

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take part in chores.

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, I find

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occurrence has positive influences on

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. Since we are trying to enjoy our life rather than serving a big family, I find more people being satisfied with

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new lifestyle. To illustrate

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, as females are less tied to household chores, they can develop their careers and experience achievements as much as males do.

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, it will lead to the development of a

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and a nation because all individuals try harder and harder for success.

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, it is definitely a significant change for a country and individuals.

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, as a whole

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changes

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, every family has been nuclearized and every member of

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group tries to be engaged with both household chores and one's own career development.

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situation is positive enough to make a happier

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since people can decide what they want.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

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Lexical resource: 7.0

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Grammatical Range: 7.0

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Topic Vocabulary:

Family structure
Modern family
Extended family
Nuclear family
Same-sex parent families
Breadwinner
Caregiving responsibilities
Family dynamics
Globalization
Economic shifts
Migration
Child-free lifestyles
Cohabitation
Traditional marriage
Perceptions
Homemaker
Communication
Shared activities

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In recent years, the family structure has changed, as well as family roles. What are the changes occurring? Do you think these changes are positive or negative?

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In many countries today there are many highly qualified graduates without employment. What factors may have caused this situation and what, in your opinion, can/should be done about it?

The crime rate nowadays is decreasing compared to the past due to advances in technology. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

You have a full time job and are also doing a part time evening course. You know find that you cannot continue the course. Write a letter in your tutor. Write a letter -describe the situation -explain why you cannot continue at this time - say what action you would like to take