The graph below shows the changes in production (millions) of three products in a garment factory from 1990 to 2010.
The line graph compares the suit and dress
production
(millions) of suits
, dresses
and coats in a clothing factory
over 20 years.
Overall
, It is clear from the line graph that the output of coats in the factory
saw a considerable increase. The production
of dresses
remained at the lowest position among the three types of clothing between 1990 and 2010.
In 1999, the most popular product in the garment factory
was
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was suited
was suiting
suits
, producing over 15 million
items, while
the figure for the production
of dresses
was 1o million
. One year later, the production
of suits
reached its peak (around 23 million
), while
the figure for dress production
just slightly rose by 2.5 million
(at 12.5 million
). After 1995, both productions of suits
and dresses
declined to 16 million
in 2005 and 11 million
in 2000 respectively. By 2010, the figure forAdd an article
a
the
production
stood at 18 million
and 15 million
each.
By contrast
, the output of coats in the clothing factory
witnessed a noticeable increase from 1990 to 2010, from around 7.5 million
rose to 25 million
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