The graph below shows the changes in production (millions) of three products in a garment factory from 1990 to 2010.

The graph below shows the changes in

production (millions) of three products in a

garment factory from 1990 to 2010.
The line graph compares the
production
(millions) of
suits
,
dresses
and coats in a clothing
factory
over 20 years.
Overall
, It is clear from the line graph that the output of coats in the
factory
saw a considerable increase. The
production
of
dresses
remained at the lowest position among the three types of clothing between 1990 and 2010. In 1999, the most popular product in the garment
factory
was
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suits
, producing over 15
million
items,
while
the figure for the
production
of
dresses
was 1o
million
. One year later, the
production
of
suits
reached its peak (around 23
million
),
while
the figure for dress
production
just slightly rose by 2.5
million
(at 12.5
million
). After 1995, both productions of
suits
and
dresses
declined to 16
million
in 2005 and 11
million
in 2000 respectively. By 2010, the figure for
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suit and dress
production
stood at 18
million
and 15
million
each.
By contrast
, the output of coats in the clothing
factory
witnessed a noticeable increase from 1990 to 2010, from around 7.5
million
rose to 25
million
.
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