The graph below shows the changes in production (millions) of three products in a garment factory from 1990 to 2010.

The graph below shows the changes in

production (millions) of three products in a

garment factory from 1990 to 2010.
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The line graph compares the
production
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(millions) of
suits
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,
dresses
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and coats in a clothing
factory
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over 20 years.
Overall
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, It is clear from the line graph that the output of coats in the
factory
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saw a considerable increase. The
production
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of
dresses
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remained at the lowest position among the three types of clothing between 1990 and 2010. In 1999, the most popular product in the garment
factory
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was
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was suited
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suits
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, producing over 15
million
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items,
while
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the figure for the
production
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of
dresses
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was 1o
million
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. One year later, the
production
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of
suits
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reached its peak (around 23
million
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),
while
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the figure for dress
production
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just slightly rose by 2.5
million
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(at 12.5
million
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). After 1995, both productions of
suits
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and
dresses
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declined to 16
million
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in 2005 and 11
million
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in 2000 respectively. By 2010, the figure for
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suit and dress
production
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stood at 18
million
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and 15
million
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each.
By contrast
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, the output of coats in the clothing
factory
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witnessed a noticeable increase from 1990 to 2010, from around 7.5
million
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rose to 25
million
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.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words production, suits, dresses, factory, million with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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