The chart below shows the results of a survey about people’s coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities.
The bar chart gives a comparison of purchasing and drinking habits of
coffee
and tea in five different cities in Australia in recent last
four weeks time frame.
As is observed, Australians tend to have their coffee
or tea in a cafe more than just buying it from coffee
houses. Moreover
, they are inclined to buy instant coffee
more than fresh ones.
The highest number for having coffee
or tea in a cafe is accounted for the Hobart and Melbourne people, both with around 64 per cent. Following
this
, Sydney ranks the second highest amount with almost 61%. While
Hobart is the highest amount for taking instant coffee
from a coffee
house, Brisbane ranked the second highest figure for it.
Regarding the figures for giving information about purchasing fresh coffee
, Sydney and Melbourne recorded the highest percentage with just about 44% and roughly 43 per cent respectively. Consequently
, Brisbane's proportion for this
figure is slightly under 35 per cent.Submitted by sepehr.kahvand on
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