Some people believe that governments should pay full course fees for students who want to study in universities. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Nowadays, more people are entering higher
education
than ever, yet some youngsters cannot access it
due to
their economic
situations
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. It is argued whether
governments
should intervene by paying the fees
of
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the whole course of study for each student who wants to obtain a tertiary
education
. I totally agree that institutions should guarantee equal opportunity, offering free university courses to every citizen. The first reason why
governments
should economically help young citizens is that political organizations can have a greater return from marginal investments. If the population is highly educated, more entrepreneurs, leaders, inventors and so on will thrive.
Hence
, massive income will be generated which means more taxes earned by the government and a better reputation for the nation. Not only will more money circulate in a country, but its well-being will
also
dramatically improve and it may attract geniuses from various countries to move from their own native
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. Another reason is that
university
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universities
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should not be for an elite class.
Education
should be offered to anyone
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so that it is a personal choice to
enroll
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and not a financial matter. Many
students
from villages or affected by poor economic conditions are forced to drop out after high school
due to
the unaffordability of universities.
For instance
, Scotland offers free tertiary
education
to every
citizens
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while
charging fees to international
students
. Despite
this
incredible offer, not every Scottish pursues higher studies, but at least they have a voice in their own choices. The economic system will not collapse, and Scotland set the example.
To conclude
, the
governments
should remove fees for national
students
offering a greater and brighter future, so that these institutions can have a return of employment in the following years.
This
is a potential win-win, both for
students
and
governments
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Higher education
  • University tuition
  • Public good
  • Economic growth
  • Fiscal responsibility
  • Merit-based scholarships
  • Need-based grants
  • Socioeconomic status
  • Educational equity
  • Income-contingent loans
  • Graduate tax
  • Financial aid
  • Student loans
  • Subsidize
  • Taxpayer funding
  • Underappreciation
  • Workforce development
  • Access to education
  • Higher learning institutions
  • Government expenditure
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