A friend had invited you for a meal at his/her place. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter 1. Thank him/her for inviting you 2. Describe how you felt about his/her family members 3. Make suggestions about his/her visit to your place

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Hi Parish, Hope you are well.

Firstly

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, I wanted to thank you so much for

lovely

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the lovely

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dinner at yours on Saturday.

Secondly

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, I would like to invite you to my place, maybe in 2 weeks ? I really enjoyed my time with you and your immediate family. I felt so welcomed and loved. I can tell, your parents created

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a closed

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closed knit

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closed-knit

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family.

More over

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Moreover

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I was very impressed

about

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with

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your

brother

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brother's

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behavours

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behaviour

. He is only 5 years old,

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however

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,however

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he exactly knows how to be around adults.

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, it is irrefutable, how smart Jordan is. His brain just surprise everyone around the table. Anyway, enough of that. I really would like to invite you to my place. As I mentioned before, my mum and dad will be in town. It would be lovely

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apply

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for

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instance

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,instance

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we could have a meal together

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My parents always ask about you, especially

they

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because they

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are so

intrested

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interested

in your university choice ! Please let me know ASAP if Saturday 02/03/2023 at 4 pm suits you. Miss you already, Martyna

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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
0
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
13
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

177 words

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The Closing

In many countries, more and more women have full-time jobs as men. There is a logic that they should share the housework equally with men. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The best way to solve the traffic and transportation problem is to encourage people to live in cities rather than suburbs or countryside. What are the effects of rapid population growth in the city? How can the quality of life city dwellers be maintain?

Global warming is one of the various climate issues. Discuss the possible causes ad offer measures to control the damage caused.

In some countries, private cars are now banned from certain city centers. What are the advantages of such a system and do you feel that this is something that most cities should adopt?