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Some people say that the only reason for /earning a foreign language Is In order to travel to or work in a foreign country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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People
 argue about the reason why learning another
language
. Some of them say that the only reason is to take holiday or get a job abroad. Meanwhile, others think that there are many reasons for it. In
this
 essay, I will share my point of
views
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view
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 about these statements. Learning
language
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a language
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 is crucial to communicate, especially
foreigners
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with foreigners
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.
Hence
, travellers usually will learn
a
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the
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language
 of their destination country to make them easier
talking
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 to the native.
Moreover
, to get special discounts
while
 buying something
to
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from
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the
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apply
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local vendors, bargaining in
local
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the local
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language
 is useful.
Next,
a lot of
people
 have a dream to work abroad
such
 as in America or Europe since these
country
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countries
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 offer several job vacancies with high pay.
Hence
, job seekers from other countries try to learn
english
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 in order to be hired there.
However
, there are many reasons to master a foreign
language
. Recently, some students want to pursue
their
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further
 education in a foreign country.
Therefore
, if they want to be accepted by the campus, they should begin
study
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 the native
language
. Another example of learning other
languanges
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languages
 is to make friends with
people
 from other nations in order to enlarge networking. It will be pleasant if we have a number of mates from foreign countries. Each can change some opinions about some issues
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 in the world to enlarge the knowledge.
To conclude
, travelling or working in a foreign city may be the main reason why
people
 try to learn a foreign
language
.
Neverthless
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Nevertheless
, there are still many reasons to master another
language
. It depends on the goal of a person.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • multilingual
  • linguistic proficiency
  • globalized world
  • cross-cultural communication
  • immersive experience
  • adaptability
  • cultural exchange
  • interpersonal skills
  • employment prospects
  • empathy
  • intellectual development
  • overcome language barriers
  • global market
  • resourceful
  • life-changing
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