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Today different types of robots are being developed which can serve as companions and workers to help at work and at home. Is this a positive or negative development?

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Nowadays, in some countries,
robots
 can serve as workers and help at work and home. Logically, it has positive and negative sides.
This
 essay will discuss the positive sides and benefits of robot workers. On the one hand,
robots
 never get tired,
while
people
 are tired after 5-6 hours of working.
Furthermore
,
robots
 can easily learn new things by changing their commands. So, it is a very useful invention. Many governments already started using
robots
.
For example
, in Germany, Japan, China, South Korea, and Singapore humans used to see
robots
 in cafes, malls, and streets. Street
robots
 always move and clean the roads, collect garbage and talk with humans to cheer up them. In the cafe,
people
 can see the
robots
 which make coffee for them. In the malls,
robots
 can help with choosing clothes or shoes. They scan the outfit and choose which is more suitable.
On the other hand
,
robots
 can help safe environment.
Robots
 do not ask to pay for it.
Furthermore
, they clean our Earth for free. Some
robots
 can collect garbage, and another one can clean water and air.
This
 is what we need at
this
 moment. Because the populace has a problem with the lack of water and clean air.
For instance
, in some American states
such
 as Las Vegas, Texas, and New York
people
 can see
robots
 that clean the air. It helps
people
 who have allergies.
To sum up
,
robots
 are the diamond invention created by
people
.
Also
, it always is useful for humanity.
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