Introduction
In
current
life, Add an article
the current
majority
of kids tend to devote most time of Correct article usage
the majority
Correct pronoun usage
their the
the
day Change the word
their
on
their smartphones. Change preposition
to
This
phenomenon might be occurred Linking Words
due to
some reasons which I assume that they mostly lead to some detrimental consequences. To be precise, it has more drawbacks rather than benefits.Linking Words
Body paragraph 1
To begin
with, technological advancements and sophisticated gadgets Linking Words
considered
to be interconnected with humanity which Add a missing verb
are considered
have
some negative influence on Change the verb form
has
children
. To illustrate, kids have Use synonyms
an
inclination to overuse their cell Change the article
the
phones
Use synonyms
due to
not having enough parental supervision. As long as parents are Linking Words
the
role models Correct article usage
apply
of
their Change preposition
for
children
, they should not prioritize Use synonyms
work
and Correct pronoun usage
their work
career
of theirs over the behaviour of Fix the agreement mistake
careers
Use synonyms
children
. Correct pronoun usage
their children
For example
, they themselves are glued to their Linking Words
phones
and even spend their time off Use synonyms
on
scrolling through the internet Change preposition
apply
instead
of encouraging Linking Words
children
to get involved Use synonyms
into
Change preposition
in
some
sports activities or spend some time out so as to refresh their Correct quantifier usage
apply
mind
. Fix the agreement mistake
minds
Consequently
, Linking Words
children
have an excessive use of smartphones Use synonyms
that
follows Correct pronoun usage
which
by
getting addicted to them.Change preposition
to
Body paragraph 2
The main results of
this
phenomenon could be observed in two negative ways. One of which is thatLinking Words
,
Remove the comma
apply
children
who are prone to use their Use synonyms
phones
excessively, are highly likely to encounter failure in their academic achievement Use synonyms
as well as
they can come across difficulties to uphold Linking Words
friendship
with their classmates. Meaning thatFix the agreement mistake
friendships
,
social media and several apps offered by Remove the comma
apply
phones
easily capture Use synonyms
attention
of Add an article
the attention
children
, Use synonyms
as a result
, they expose themselves to watching videos Linking Words
contain
Wrong verb form
containing
a
Remove the article
apply
violence
or inappropriate content Replace the word
violent
to
their age. Being addicted to them, they are less impossible to neglect their study Change preposition
for
along with
falling behind with Linking Words
syllabus
of their school. Aside from Correct article usage
the syllabus
this
, not getting on well with classmates leads to losing bonds with them which is the result of indifferent teachers who allow pupils to have an access to Linking Words
phones
, even during lessons. Another disadvantage of the given matter is related to health problems that can be obtained by overconsumption Use synonyms
Linking Words
such
devices Change preposition
of such
like
cell Change preposition
as
phones
or laptops. Use synonyms
That is
to say, it can negatively Linking Words
effect
on mental ability or memory of those Correct your spelling
affect
children
. If, Use synonyms
for instance
, they are let to possess Linking Words
phones
from Use synonyms
their
early Change the word
an
ages
, they may become grumpy and aggressive, Fix the agreement mistake
age
that
seems Correct pronoun usage
which
as if
normal temper to themselves, as they grow up. Considering all discussed reasons, the elderly, mostly parents and teachers, should make use of controlling Correct word choice
apply
children
in what way they are using their Use synonyms
phones
Use synonyms
as well as
putting some restrictions Linking Words
such
as taking their Linking Words
phones
after 8 p.m or checking the websites they mostly pay a visit.Use synonyms
Conclusion
To conclude
, I would claim that most factors leading to detrimental results are Linking Words
due to
Linking Words
unconsciousness
of Correct article usage
the unconsciousness
children
and Use synonyms
indifference
of parents. Correct article usage
the indifference
However
, it can be tackled, if people responsible for Linking Words
children
take Use synonyms
a
serious consideration of their future and shaping behaviour.Remove the article
apply