Environmental problems such as pollution and Climate variation are increasing nowadays the government have taken some measure at a global level but they only get some solution why is it so how can this problem be solved

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These days, environmental issues
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as pollution and Climate variation are proliferating at an alarming rate. To tackle
this
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issue, the higher Authorities have taken certain measures globally,
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, they receive only a few answers.
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is happening
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the increasing number of manufacturing industries,
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this
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issue can be resolved by employing stringent actions against those industries that did not follow rules. on the one hand,
due to
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growing industries, higher officials could not control pollution and Climate variation properly.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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