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Competitiveness is considered a good quality in most societies nowadays. How does it affect individuals? Do you think this is positive or negative?

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These days, it is believed in many nations that competitiveness is beneficial.
This
 mainly results in
individuals
 who are ready to face the hardships of life, and I personally believe that
such
 a trait impacts positively
upon
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the financial status of
individuals
 and countries. Chief among the influences of promoting competitiveness relates to building a solid personality which is equipped with all the characteristics required for successful future
individuals
. Being adaptable to competitive environments, especially during childhood, improves one's various skills
such
 as the ability of critical thinking, innovation and problem-solving skills by engaging in diversified competitions during school days. In Egyptian international schools,
for example
, the number of racing, dancing and art competitions have been increased
due to
 the fact that schools' managements have realized the significance of competing for schoolchildren development. I firmly believe that promoting
this
 quality would definitely boost the financial position of
individuals
. When working in competitive working conditions, just as
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 company, multinational firms and high-technology corporations, employees endeavour to devote much time and effort to their work.
Hence
, remarkably would they gain lucrative payment and generate more revenues, and they would be able to support their families and reach a better living standard.
Furthermore
, not only would the ubiquity of competitiveness in
workplace
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 benefit
individuals
, but
also
 it would lead to a thriving economy owing to the upsurge in productivity rates in countries' public and private factories and the industrial sector as a whole. In conclusion, the predomination of competitive atmospheres at schools plays a
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quintessential
 role in preparing a well-equipped generation who is ready to encounter life
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challenges
.
Thus
, I am convinced that without enforcing
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challenges
, nations' economies would not be able to thrive.
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