As mass communication and transport continue to grow, societies are becoming more and more alike leading to a phenomenon known as globalization. Some people fear that globalization will inevitably lead to the total loss of cultural identity. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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Many people are worried thinking that

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will destroy cultural

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. Personally, I believe that

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may help to preserve cultural

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thanks to technology and may divulge

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identity

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in order to be shared and keep it safe. For these reasons, I completely disagree with the statement given.

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, it is well known that

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could have some drawbacks,

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, it could help to preserve cultural dances, languages or recipes thanks to the internet.

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, using all tools that

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has, cultural

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can be saved for centuries, helping communities with their traditions.

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, if the population records their dances, copies their books, and saves their knowledge in the online cloud, it will be safe and will not be either damaged or lost.

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reason,

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may help in

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task and has a lot of resources to make it easier.

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, the aforementioned tools can be used to divulge the cultural

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of each region.

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, the Spanish population can learn about the cultural

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of Japan or India, using tools

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as Tik Tok or apps to meet new people around the world. Thanks to

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, people are able to share their traditions and their culture in order to become more popular and unforgettable.

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although

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has some disadvantages, I support that it can help to preserve cultural

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and at the same time that it should be used as a loudspeaker to divulge it. For these reasons I completely disagree with the statement given.

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