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The best way to help underachieving pupils is to have compulsory after school activities which they must attend. This way they will become more involved in schools and their grades will improve

#pupils #school #activities #schools #grades
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 to help underachieving students is to have compulsory courses after school
who
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 fall behind with their tasks.
This
 method can help to broaden their mind. I completely agree with
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 part in various activities. On the
one
 hand, there are so many benefits
from
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 learning
out
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 of
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 system. First of all,
young
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 generation
have
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 a chance to know the subject inside and out.
This
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because their tutor maybe has enough time to pay attention to
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each
one
 of the
student
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. And it is
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 opportunity for them to learn it by heart.
However
, in schools teachers do not have time to spend on children and after
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 they cannot draw attention to everyone. Second of all, studying
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subject
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 that
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 to their profession
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 their course is beneficial for them.
Therefore
, tutors usually revise something by using past
pepers
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papers
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. If they do not know any information about that subject. They have to cram for it.
For example
, they might do some revision. Maybe it could be helpful for them.
In addition
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student
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 should take part
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.
This
 is because nowadays most
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 are easily distracted.
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 they should have extra activities. On
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, every
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 have their own interests or passion to learn something new that
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 their interest.
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,
school
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 or even
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goverment
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government
governments
 do not have to make pupils
to
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study all of the subjects. And
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student
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 should be educated
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 of
one
's
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. Taking everything into account, having compulsory classes
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 useful for
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 who educated by well-qualified teachers
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • under-achieving
  • compulsory
  • after-school activities
  • grades
  • improve
  • support
  • resources
  • motivation
  • engagement
  • behavior
  • discipline
  • life skills
  • teamwork
  • time management
  • organizational skills
  • sense of community
  • belonging
  • drawbacks
  • limited freedom
  • pressure
  • flexible
  • study support programs
  • individualized tutoring
  • address
  • needs
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