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The wealth gap between 1st world countries and 3rd world countries seems to be increasing. How can we reduce this gap? Do you think that developed countries have a duty to assist developing countries in every way?

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It is commonly
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 that there is a huge growing economic
differrence
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difference
differences
 between the most developed and developing
contries
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countries
. Some people believe that 1st world countries ought to provide help to 3rd world countries. in my opinion the wealth gap must be reduced by providing help to undeveloped
teritories
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territories
.
To begin
 with, the most noticeable reason why the difference
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 is that the state is considered economically
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stable
then
 there is a high level of education and no unemployment.
Therefore
, to decrease poverty there is a need to provide more
universiries
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universities
 and free schools for everyone,
hence
, there will be more
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 qualified workers.
Besides
this
, to create the
iideal
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ideal
 world where all people have
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equal
right
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dispite
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despite
 their nation,
he
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 USA,
for instance
, may help Moldovia to build more institutes and fund
it
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them
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.
Moreover
, they can provide more
moreworkplaces
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more workplaces
 as
countries
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countries'
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 economy is directly connected with the rate of unemployment.
To conclude
, the growing wealth gap may scare the government, but there are ways to stop
this
 trend and find a
wayfor
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way for
 others to increase their economy.
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