The bar chart shows the percentage of the total world population in 4 countries in 1950 and 2002, and projections for 2050. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart shows the percentage of the total world population in 4 countries in 1950 and 2002, and projections for 2050.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The chart gives information about the percentage of the
population
in four countries compared to the whole
world
in 1950, 2002 and
forecasting
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2050.
Overall
, the percentage of the total
world
population
declined in China, the USA and Japan and the future expectation will be a constant
down
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trend,
whereas
India showed a rise and
a positive projections
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for 2050. In regard to the decreasing countries, China reached the peak of 23% of the whole
world
population
in 1950,
then
they went down to 20% with the prospection of a
subsequently
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plum of 5% in 2050.
This
country had the highest
perecentage
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percentage
in 1950 and 2002 but it will be overtaken by India in 2050. The trend of the USA and Japan is going to be similar, in
fact
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they dropped
of
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2% and 1%, respectively, over the 52-years period. The USA will be stable in the future years,
while
Japan will steadily decline to 1%.
On the other hand
, India will have a brighter projection. The raise
of
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population
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already began in 2002 when they counted 17% of the total
world
population
, 2% more than
1950
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. The forecast will expect an increase of 2%, overpassing the
population
of China.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words population, world with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "declined" was used 2 times.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Bar chart
  • World population
  • Percentage
  • Projection
  • Demographics
  • Trend
  • Significant change
  • Ranking
  • Shifts
  • Decline
  • Growth
  • Comparative
  • Population distribution
  • Notable
  • Increase
  • Decrease
  • Population dynamics
  • Data interpretation
  • Summarize
  • Trends over time
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