The line graph compares how much time it would take for three companies to manufacture a refrigerator in 1990 and 2000.

The line graph compares how much time it would take for three companies to manufacture a refrigerator in 1990 and 2000.
The line graph illustrates how much
time
it would take for
Company
A,
Company
B
and
Company
C
to produce a
refrigerator
over the period of 10 years. it is clear from the line graph that in comparison to the other two
company
,
Company
C
need more
time
to manufacture a
refrigerator
and the
refrigerator
production
time
taken by
Company
B
remained stable during
this
period. In 1999,
Company
C
took 35
hours
to manufacture a
refrigerator
,
while
the figure for
Company
A and
Company
B
was 30
hours
and around 27
hours
respectively. By 2000, the production
time
of a
refrigerator
for
Company
C
had decreased to about 29
hours
. it took around 31
hours
to produce a
refrigerator
in
Company
A in 1999 and its figure experienced a noticeable decline, at 23
hours
in 2000.
By contrast
, between 1999 and 2000, the
refrigerator
production
time
for
Company
B
saw a slight decrease, from 27
hours
to just over 25
hours
.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words time, company, b, c, refrigerator, hours with synonyms.
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