In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. why might this be the case. Do you think this a positive or negativve situation.

At present age, choices of accommodation among
people
have changed a lot and it varies for
people
living in different countries.
According to
some
people
, possessing one's own
house
is regarded as better than renting a
house
. There are numerous causes behind
this
case and
this
essay will explore its positive and negative outcomes of it. First and foremost,
people
especially those who are living in urban areas have migrated from the countryside for the purpose of livelihood or education.
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of
people
is most interested in renting houses in the cities because they do not have any permanent residentship here. I personally believe that
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the ever-increasing renting
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can lead to many negative outcomes.
For example
, there is no doubt that
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a rented
house
is temporary and will not be regarded as an asset of the renter.
Therefore
, if the landlord asked the tenant to leave the
house
for any valid reason, the tenant would become homeless overnight.
On the contrary
, owning a
house
of one's own have some disadvantages as well. Having a
house
is a big responsibility and there are so many tasks associated with it from beginning to end.
For example
, If someone wants to buy or build a
house
he must have enough amount of money. In the case of , the building he must have to make a design, hire construction workers, and build which is a long process of work.
Moreover
, maintenance is another criterion of owning
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house
which is not an easy task. Probably because of the above-mentioned reasons
people
are more inclined to the rented a
house
instead
of having their own.
To conclude
,
people
choose their accommodation
according to
their profession, choices, and economic condition. Though
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having own
house
also
has some disadvantages, rented ones do not outweigh them.
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