You have seen an advertisement from a couple, Who live in australia, for someone to their two children your language for a year. Write a letter to the couple. In your letter, explain why you think you would be suitable for the job say what else you could do for the family give your reasons for wanting the job.
Dear Sir/Madam,
I have seen an advertisement in which you are looking for a
Punjabi
teacher for your children. I am writing this
letter to share my skills and knowledge for this
opportunity.
Firstly
, I am a native of India where I have studied the Punjabi
language for a maximum of 10 years continuously. Also
, I have been teaching toddlers at Sikh
temple in Canada since 2022.
Correct article usage
a Sikh
However
, I know that you are currently staying in Australia. Thus
, Online classes will be arranged for your convenience. When I have been certified as a Punjabi
language instructor, I have to give a certification to children after completion of the course.
Without affecting these facts, I am also
seeking a job due to
the pandemic. Hence
, It would be great if you chose me as a Punjabi
language tutor. I wish to know when you want to attend classes.
I hope this
letter will be helpful to you and your children.
Thanking You,
Yours faithfully,Submitted by insighttribez on
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coherence cohesion
Ensure that each paragraph presents a clear main idea and that the subsequent sentences develop that idea further.
coherence cohesion
Use a wider range of linking words and phrases to help connect ideas more naturally and improve flow.
task achievement
For a stronger task response, provide more detailed examples of your experience, qualifications, and why you would be the best fit for the job.
task achievement
To maintain a suitable writing tone, ensure consistency of formality throughout the letter. Avoid informal language when applying for a job in a formal context.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite