Many countries now face an economic downturn so it is better for each country to focus on its own problems rather than helping other countries. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
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favour
that it is better for each Add an article
a favour
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country
to focus on its own difficulties rather than giving hand each
other.I disaccord Change preposition
to each
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mentioned phenomenon.However
,I will discuss with logical
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There Correct article usage
the upcoming
are
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is
adiquate
evidence of Correct your spelling
adequate
this
view which are substantial.The first and foremost one is during the pandemic of covid-19 every country
had
faced a huge loss of economic shrinkage.Adding more to it If that time Unnecessary verb
apply
the
all community think that we are not going to help Remove the article
apply
other
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another country
other countries
country
we only helped themselves
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ourselves
then
in this
epoch i
think most of the Change the capitalization
I
countries
will die.Additionally
for example
like in some report
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reports
in
the pandemic Change preposition
during
of
covid-19 Change preposition
apply
india
had no more oxygen gas but Change the capitalization
India
at
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in
end
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,end
singapore
helped to send oxygen via air.Change the capitalization
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someone's
countries
faced so many difficulties such
as medicine,food,land etc.when some countries
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suffered
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from
unknow
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unknown
then
the developed countries
helped them to supply food,clothes,medicines and other additional facilities.Moreover
,During the time of pandemic
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,pandemic
such
jobs for any individual in some countries
.Although
other developed countries
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during covid-19 for hiring Correct your spelling
vacancy
foreigners
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foreign
worker
they give them shelter,food Fix the agreement mistake
workers
as well as
medical facilities. While
there are huge contributions for one country
to another country
when they suffering
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suffer
such
kind of problems.
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,countries
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their own facilities.Change the verb form
shared
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others nation
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other nations
face
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faces
problem
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problems
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,according to
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,me
countries
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