Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people, however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
The launching different schemes and implementing those schemes for the betterment of the
administration
focus is purely on attaining the growth in Change noun form
administration's
economy
. In my Add an article
the economy
opinion
public authorities need to change their attention towards improvement in quality of life and Add a comma
,opinion
education
for everyone hereby, this
essay describes about
the pros and cons of Remove the preposition
apply
importance
of the duties taken by the government.
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the importance
Firstly
, through
the process of improving the quality of life and Change preposition
apply
education
establishes a plethora of opportunities for the people
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, therefore,
therefore
the lifestyle of the people
gradually grow
Correct subject-verb agreement
grows
moreover
developing the infrastructure facilities of hospitals and other institutions is necessary furthermore
providing scholorships
to help students in backward classes and subsidies in various forms and improving the research and development . Correct your spelling
scholarships
For instance
, when there was a covid outbreak around 90% of countires
faced Correct your spelling
countries
counties
lack
of health infrastructure and Correct article usage
a lack
this
have
caused Change the verb form
has
loss
of thousands of life Correct article usage
the loss
such
causalities can be solved only with the help of aloting
more funds.
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allotting
On the other hand
, finance minister
are required to consultFix the agreement mistake
ministers
day to day
meetings with the concerned departments in Add a hyphen
day-to-day
education
, tourism and sports thus
knowing the probems
faced by the public Correct your spelling
problems
in addition
Change preposition
to
people
. For example
, Swatch bharat
mission and Change the capitalization
Bharat
Education
for all was started by Correct article usage
the goverment
goverment
in India Correct your spelling
government
intial
period Correct your spelling
initial
partcipation
Correct your spelling
participation
to
the program was lower but Change preposition
in
later
program got a wide audience and resulted in Add an article
the later
a
great success.
even though economic progress is important showing Correct article usage
apply
surge
in the GDP of the country by increasing the import and exports Correct article usage
a surge
however
other factors concerning the people
should be taken as the primary prefernace
.
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preference
reference
To sum up
, i
agree that Change the capitalization
I
Correct article usage
the preferance
preferance
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preference
to
public health and Change preposition
for
education
should be given by authorities than considering economic progress and also
with the help of thorough research and analysis government can solve one third
of Add a hyphen
one-third
problems
faced by the citizens of the country.Correct article usage
the problems
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