Some people think that the government should give money to creative people, such as artists and musicians. To what extent do you agree?

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In the current world, there are uncountable creative population
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are divided into two groups one is rich and the other is poor.
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say that government should give
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are against
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who support
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should not give
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.  First of all, many
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support artists
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because
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detrimental issues.
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, Mehmet Akif Ersoy is the writer of the national anthem .He was a very poor person and he died from underfeeding.
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, these kinds of
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will create lots of invaluable work, if they do not die from
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,
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want to create funds from
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for seeing more literary work.
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,
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is
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thing that everyone can not
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in or understand so they do not want to use their tax
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for these
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earn their
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with individual efforts, not
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help from anyone.
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, helping these situations can happen in developed countries because if societies fight
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shortages, the government's first responsibility is
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this
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problem in all countries.
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, any African
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government's
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is to find fresh water for the whole country.
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, they can create found for other stuff. From my perspective,
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should not give
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to artists but they should build
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houses where
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can show their
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and they find purchasers.
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,
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charities which one work for an artist but
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these help have not to give
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. In conclusion, with everything that has been done so far, some
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say that
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should help because most artists die from shortages and they can not show their
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, others say that there
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more important stuff than an artist, politics should help the other side and the arts are a very specific thing all
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not interested in so
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should not give
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  • job opportunities
  • economic growth
  • cultural enrichment
  • public exhibits
  • international recognition
  • further investment
  • preserve cultural heritage
  • creative individuals
  • financial support
  • artistic movements
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