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As major class around the world are growing, so are their problems. What are these problems for young people living in cities? What are possible solutions for these problems?

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Humans are responsible for a variety of environmental problems, but we can
also
 take steps to reduce the damage that we are causing to the planet.
This
 essay will discuss environmental issues and the measures that governments and individuals can take to address these problems. On the one hand, two of the biggest threats to the
environment
 are air pollution and waste. Gas emissions from factories and exhaust fumes from vehicles lead to global warming, which may have a devastating effect on the planet in the future. As the people population increases, we are
also
 producing 70% of devastating, which contaminates the earth and pollutes rivers and oceans.
On the other hand
, governments could certainly make more effort to reduce air pollution.
Likewise
, another key consideration when judging the process
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 a modern country should be how well that nation protects the natural
environment
, and whether it is moving towards
environment
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environmental
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 sustainability.Individuals should
also
 take responsibility for the impact they have on the
environment
. They can take public transport rather than driving, choose products with less packaging, and recycle as much as possible. Most supermarkets now provide reusable bags for shoppers
as well as
 banks for recycling glass, plastic and paper in their car parks. By refusing and recycling we can help to reduce waste.
To sum up
, both
nations
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 governments and people must play their part in looking after the
environment
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