Rich countries often give money to poorer countries, but it does not solve poverty. Therefore, developed countries should give other types of help to the poor countries rather than financial aid. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Countries
which have better Use synonyms
economy
often help poor Fix the agreement mistake
economies
countries
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by
financial Change preposition
with
support
; Use synonyms
however
, it may not solve the Linking Words
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problems. Correct your spelling
origin
original
Besides
, Linking Words
instead
of giving money to Linking Words
the
poor Correct article usage
apply
countries
, I believe there are still many ways to help and I will express my opinion in Use synonyms
this
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eassy
.
In my point of view, I agree that it is easy and convenient for every developed nation to help poor Correct your spelling
essay
easy
countries
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such
as Linking Words
Afracian
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African
countries
or South American Use synonyms
countries
by sending them money. Use synonyms
However
, it would only solve the problem at that moment, so I think the governments should have some distance plans Linking Words
for instance
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as
short, and long programs. Change preposition
apply
In other words
, between Linking Words
two
nations, the governments can make a deal to help for building roads to Correct article usage
the two
centers
or Change the spelling
centres
training
supports for giving information to locals and help them improve their skills. Replace the word
train
Therefore
, the governments can make Linking Words
schools
connections to help children be able to Change the noun form
school
Add a missing verb
be educated
educated
. Each program can be planned Change the form of the verb
educate
by
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in
short
term Correct article usage
the short
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for as
as
few months or long term for Correct your spelling
a
few
years to finish. Correct article usage
a few
While
running the project, the Linking Words
projecter
has to make some Correct your spelling
projector
project
check lists
to make sure that the programs are following the Correct your spelling
checklists
strutures
.
Though all nations are able to Correct your spelling
statutes
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support
, there are many drawbacks Correct pronoun usage
itsupport
wihin
the Correct your spelling
within
countries
. Use synonyms
For example
, in poor Linking Words
countries
, there are so many people Use synonyms
demand
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who demand
the
aid; Correct article usage
apply
however
, they have never been helped because Linking Words
of
the system is Change preposition
apply
overwholm
. Sometimes, it is frustrating to find that the system works well, but Correct your spelling
overwhelmed
overwhelm
they
can not Correct pronoun usage
it
support
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the
people's Correct article usage
apply
need
Fix the agreement mistake
needs
such
as specific medical Linking Words
machine
or Fix the agreement mistake
machines
long term
treatment for Add a hyphen
long-term
dieases
.
In conclusion, I believe Correct your spelling
diseases
though
there are benefits and disadvantages to Correct word choice
apply
help
poor Wrong verb form
helping
countries
without Use synonyms
Use synonyms
support
them Change the verb form
supporting
money
directly. It takes more time to see the effect; Change preposition
with money
however
, the advantages Linking Words
such
as running programs will help the poor nations improve their skills to solve the problems by themselves.Linking Words
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