Rich countries often give money to poorer countries, but it does not solve poverty. Therefore, developed countries should give other types of help to the poor countries rather than financial aid. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Countries

which have better

economy

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economies

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often help poor

countries

by

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with

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financial

support

;

however

, it may not solve the

oringin

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origin

original

problems.

Besides

,

instead

of giving money to

the

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poor

countries

, I believe there are still many ways to help and I will express my opinion in

this

eassy

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essay

easy

. In my point of view, I agree that it is easy and convenient for every developed nation to help poor

countries

such

as

Afracian

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African

countries

or South American

countries

by sending them money.

However

, it would only solve the problem at that moment, so I think the governments should have some distance plans

for instance

as

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short, and long programs.

In other words

, between

two

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nations, the governments can make a deal to help for building roads to

centers

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centres

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or

training

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supports for giving information to locals and help them improve their skills.

Therefore

, the governments can make

schools

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connections to help children be able to

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be educated

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educated

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educate

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. Each program can be planned

by

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in

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short

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the short

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term

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for as

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as

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a

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few months or long term for

few

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a few

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years to finish.

While

running the project, the

projecter

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projector

project

has to make some

check lists

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checklists

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to make sure that the programs are following the

strutures

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statutes

. Though all nations are able to

support

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itsupport

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, there are many drawbacks

wihin

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within

the

countries

.

For example

, in poor

countries

, there are so many people

demand

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the

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aid;

however

, they have never been helped because

of

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the system is

overwholm

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overwhelmed

overwhelm

. Sometimes, it is frustrating to find that the system works well, but

they

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it

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can not

support

the

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people's

need

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needs

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such

as specific medical

machine

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machines

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or

long term

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long-term

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treatment for

dieases

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diseases

. In conclusion, I believe

though

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there are benefits and disadvantages to

help

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helping

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poor

countries

without

support

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supporting

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them

money

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with money

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directly. It takes more time to see the effect;

however

, the advantages

such

as running programs will help the poor nations improve their skills to solve the problems by themselves.