As major cities around the world are growing, so are their problems. What are these problems for young people living in cities? What are possible solutions for these problems?

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generation and possible answers to solve

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generation. Many countries

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their aims.

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governments which

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want to

developing

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rapidly

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up

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the city because of difficulties.

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lot of ways to solve

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problems

. The main way to solve these

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government

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of the security and create

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one of the developing

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USA always trying to create plenty amount of work plans and it was a reason

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achieve

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their aims.

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fame. Taking everything into consideration, the

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for

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improvement by solving the

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the

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