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You are looking for a part-time job. Write a letter to an employment agency. In your letter: - introduce yourself - explain what sort of job you would like - say what experience and skills you have.

#job #employment #agency #sort #skills
Dear Sir or Madam! My name is Mehwish Peter, an experienced professional. I am writing
this
 letter to seek employment in a fintech company. I have completed my masters in 2017 in a diverse curriculum program named Innovation Management from a renowned University. My primary subject was
software
 testing during the master’s course, and I certainly have a sound knowledge of
software
 validation techniques.
Therefore
, I am looking for different career options, yet in a similar field of Testing.
For instance
, Quality Engineer, Project Manager in Testing, and Quality Analyst positions. I prefer to pursue my career in the aviation industry as I have a keen interest in it. Right after my graduation, I started working as a
software
 tester and carried out testing on different platforms
such
 as Linux, Microsoft, Mobile Application devices, and websites.
Moreover
, I have been teaching testing methodologies to beginners who want to pursue careers in a similar field. I have more than 4 years of experience in the
software
 industry and have won the best employee award during my employment at Playtech.
However
, I lost my employment
due to
 the Covid pandemic and decided to contact your agency to look for similar opportunities for me. I have attached my resume and additional certificates for future reference. Thank you for considering my request. Looking forward to hearing from you. Yours sincerely,
Submitted by mehwishpeter.est on

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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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