Some think that ambition is a good quality. Is it important to be ambitious? Is it a positive or negative characteristic?

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Goals and ambitions can keep us hopeful, give us motivation and meaning in life and away to success. In my opinion, we need the ambition to feel confident and powerful and keep trying. Currently, my most important short-term goal is to migrate to Canada and continue my education for the master’s degree, so that I can expand and update my knowledge. I have finished my graduation in software engineering from a private university in my country and at the same time worked in different technology companies. More than 8 years of experience working and studying at the same time, has helped me to be responsible and independent. Presently, preparing for the IELTS exam is the first and most important step to

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my ambitions. After, that I need to go to a programming class to review my major and get a recommendation letter from my professors. ,

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ambition because I think immigration, work and living in Canada would change my life and future.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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2 paragraphs

178 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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