Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at presuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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, which is known as the heart of any market, is playing a controversial role nowadays.

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many believe that it has had remarkable success to attract customers, some people come to

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effect of it, as

customer

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tedious. I personally share the opinion of those who still say advertising is going well even if we can recognize some

weakness

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in it. To introduce a product's functions and applications we are seeking to get, and,

furthermore

, to say how we apply a device efficiently more,

, I suppose, has been presenting shiny performance since a few decades ago. Generally speaking, two items, which can be seen clearly behind

this

kind of programme,

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creativity and innovation opening

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path

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toward

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cognition awareness in

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society. In general, apart from the funny

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they normally consist of, adverts, for me, are seeming to be instructive in case I have not yet observed the item before.

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, neither will any item be recognized as useful nor the comparison is impossible in order to end up making

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choice

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On the other hand

, as long as a programme tend to just

presuade

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persuade

people to feel like they have new needs to meet, and they should allocate some budget, it may only hunt fashion slaves, as others consider

such

information far-fetch.

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this

idea

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that as far as essential needs are concerned, the main implication of

seems to produce extra

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unnecessary

needs.

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, a huge proportion of money

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being paid to prepare these kinds of programmes;

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, my society,

for instance

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money to tackle some other essential matters like improving

low quality

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goods

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reasonable price. In conclusion, even though the main mission of

adveritising

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advertising

a product is selling before addressing any other values a product can possess,

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it would be difficult to get insights about what we should buy whether

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9Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
25Grammar mistakes
 

6 paragraphs

342 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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Topic Vocabulary:

persuade
promote
attract
influence
impact
consumerism
commercialism
market
product
brand
endorsement
manipulative
saturated
overwhelmed
repetitive
distracting
irrelevant
exaggerated
misleading
desensitized

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Fully explain your ideas

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