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Most countries allow 18-year olds to start driving a car. Some say it is good to allow at this age. But others think that the age to start driving should be at least 25. Discuss both the views and give your opinion

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Thanks to cars
people
 can be at the wished place in a few minutes. And to have your own car you must have a driver’s license. But getting it is more difficult than driving any transport. Every
country
 has difficult laws to get that important document. If in one
country
 you can get it from
eighteen
 years old, in another one you can drive from twenty-five. Most countries allow
eighteen
 years old to start driving a car. And the cause of
this
,
people
 start to respond to their actions themselves. And if they do not comply with the laws of the
country
 they’ll pay a fine or they’ll have to be in prison for a
while
. On another hand, in some ,countries
people
 can be on the road in the role of “driver” when they become twenty-five only. That’s the cause that can be limiting the speed.
Eighteen
 aged young adults can exceed the limited speed. Because they were teens only a year ago and I don’t think that they think more special than teenagers.
Then
 that
people
 can think that exceeding speed is cool and so on. After ,that they can do more auto accidents in the
country
. In my opinion, all
people
 aged
eighteen
 can have a right to drive a car. Because, in a bad situation they can work and pay fines, and be liable for their actions. But we should say “No!” to the population who wants to buy a driver’s licence.
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