In their advertising, businesses nowadays usually emphasise that their products are new in some way. Why is this? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

These days, business
companies
would try to expose
the
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new features in their
products
.
Hence
, it is called
as
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the marketing strategy to maintain their selling numbers and attract
customers
throughout the tight
competitions
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competition
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among all
companies
.
This
is a positive growth to overcome new methods in sales. Since there are a lot of
companies
nowadays and some of them even have the same type of product to sell,
therefore
to be able to overcome
this
intense competition and to stand out among other
companies
, they should make some
invention
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to the marketing strategy
such
as advertising their new features even in a small context of changes.
For example
, each year Apple would launch their new phone
products
including
the
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new features and changes inside it,
thus
the product will be sold rapidly every year. In
this
case, the role of an encouraging word inside the advertisement could
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up the sales value. As long as the
customers
are feeling
satisifed
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satisfied
, it is a positive development because
with
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this
marketing system, they will try to make some
improvement
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improvements
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or changes
on
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the other
products
even if it is just
in
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the
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small scale. Despite that, from the point of view of the customer, they will experience something different from the prior
products
,
therefore
it could affect the statistic of buyers and give profit to the business.
For example
, in the fashion industry
spesifically
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specifically
in
bag
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production area, the designer never
create
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a new design
of
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the bags so the
products
have only one variety and so the advertisement
also
didn't improve.
This
could influence the
decrease
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redeability
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readability
rideability
from
customers
. In conclusion, to assure that the company has launched some
products
in
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certain new
feature
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features
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is a positive way of development to attract
customers
and
mantain
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maintain
their
selling
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sales
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market.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • emphasise
  • advertising
  • products
  • innovation
  • competitive strategy
  • consumer dissatisfaction
  • value
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