Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement

There is no doubt that these days it is widely recognized that the majority of individuals think that they have lots of options.In

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side of views,the people who completely disagree that in

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era we have many choices.The main reason given to support

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is that some of them say that the choices are limited

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are not cover all the fields.

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do not have various majors for the students who have

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to study a specific science

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university.

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,these sorts of institutions force some

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students

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to study abroad

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some of them have financial issues.

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these days there is a huge development in

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technology and machinery

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all around the globe.

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digitalization is one way

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assist

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in providing many alternatives for different sectors.

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the government can take part in

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learning process and encourage the pupils to study abroad.

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limited options for

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construction materials many firms can assist in

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case by ordering online using different websites. In conclusion,I agree that there

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many options in our daily life.I believe that the improvement in the industrial and social fields

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lots of choices in any section.