Some believe technology has made our lives too complex and the solution is to lead a simpler life without technology. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays,

people

has

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became

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too much dependent on smart technological

gadgets

.A fraction of individuals

opine

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that

,

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technological evolution has made humans too difficult, and to avoid

this

issue individuals should not

use

any kind of technical

gadgets

.I completely disagree with

above

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notion.In the forthcoming

paragraphs

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i

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have

elobareted

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elaborated

such

reasons regarding it.

The first

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and foremost technological advancements are very beneficial for

human

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in their work-life.To

elobaret

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cabaret

this

,

multi national

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multinational

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corporations

uses

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electronic

gadgets

like

,

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computers,printers,xerox

machine

and so on.which make a

buisness

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business

person work burden less stressful.Computers are

usefull

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useful

in many ways like sending

any

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Email,

make

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making

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a presentation

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presentation

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presentations

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, making files, and so on.

Furthermore

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smartphones taking the place of

computer

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computers

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.In recent times smartphones are now equally smart as

computer

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computers

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also

they are easy to carry for

people

.

People

use

mobile

for

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call

people

,send

massages

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messages

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,play

videogame

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a videogame

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and

listen

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music. Another reason is technological evolution

make

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people

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life smooth in many ways.

For instance

use

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using

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washing

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a washing

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machine

, dishwasher, microwave oven,

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and airconditioner

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airconditioner

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are the

gadgets

which make a woman's

life less

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lifeless

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tough.washing

machine

wash

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the

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clothes without any guidance

as well as

dishwasher

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a dishwasher

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clean

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the dishes and utensils.

Infact

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In fact

with the help of our surrounding technology, we can concentrate on more meaningful work.

Also

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this

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gadgets

can give

people

spare time which they

use

to spend with their family.

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this

issue, technological advancements make

people

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people's

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life easy in

buisness

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business

with

gadgets

like

computer

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computers

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and laptops.And,

also

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helpful for a person to do daily chores like washing clothes,plates and utensils with the help of

gadgets

like washing

machine

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machines

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and

dishwasher

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dishwashers

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.