Some believe technology has made our lives too complex and the solution is to lead a simpler life without technology. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays,
people
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became
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too much dependent on smart technological
gadgets
.A fraction of individuals
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that
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technological evolution has made humans too difficult, and to avoid
this
issue individuals should not
use
any kind of technical
gadgets
.I completely disagree with
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notion.In the forthcoming
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i
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have
elobareted
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elaborated
such
reasons regarding it.
The first
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and foremost technological advancements are very beneficial for
human
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humans
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in their work-life.To
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this
,
multi national
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corporations
uses
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electronic
gadgets
like
,
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computers,printers,xerox
machine
and so on.which make a
buisness
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business
person work burden less stressful.Computers are
usefull
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useful
in many ways like sending
any
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a presentation
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presentation
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presentations
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, making files, and so on.
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smartphones taking the place of
computer
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computers
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.In recent times smartphones are now equally smart as
computer
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also
they are easy to carry for
people
.
People
use
mobile
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call
people
,send
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,play
videogame
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and
listen
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music. Another reason is technological evolution
make
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people
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life smooth in many ways.
For instance
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washing
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a washing
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machine
, dishwasher, microwave oven,
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and airconditioner
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airconditioner
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are the
gadgets
which make a woman's
life less
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lifeless
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tough.washing
machine
wash
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the
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clothes without any guidance
as well as
dishwasher
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a dishwasher
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clean
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the dishes and utensils.
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with the help of our surrounding technology, we can concentrate on more meaningful work.
Also
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this
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gadgets
can give
people
spare time which they
use
to spend with their family.
To conclude
this
issue, technological advancements make
people
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life easy in
buisness
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business
with
gadgets
like
computer
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computers
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and laptops.And,
also
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helpful for a person to do daily chores like washing clothes,plates and utensils with the help of
gadgets
like washing
machine
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machines
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and
dishwasher
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dishwashers
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.
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