The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The picture illustrates how a village is reconstructed for touristic purposes.
Overall
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, the island has extensively developed with regard to the construction of houses, facilities, and roads. In the previous version of the area, there was almost empty land lying approximately 200 meters to the east-west.
Moreover
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, a few trees were situated on the east and the west of the land, and the beach was located on the west edge. After the reconstruction, the woodland was protected and any trees did not be cleared. The facilities of swimming and sailing were built on the west and south coast of the area.
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, plenty of houses were constructed to provide accommodation for visitors, and a restaurant and a reception were put in the middle of the accommodation area. Footpaths and a vehicle track were paved to offer transport between houses and the reception.
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