Immigration has a major impact on the society. What are the main reasons of immigration? To what consequences can it lead?

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Immigration
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and population movements have occurred throughout the world’s history. Nowadays, is one of the facts which has more impact on our society. Personally, I suppose that the main reasons for
immigration
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are bad conditions in your own
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and the hope of having a better life, and the consequences could be multiple, but I would highlight the possibility of a rejection by the
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’s citizens motivated by the racism and an improvement of their conditions.
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, someone could be motivated to leave their own
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due to
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difficult circumstances.
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could be a war, an awful economic situation, or unacceptable politics.
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could be related to the job offers and the salary, which could lead immigrants to have the hope of being hired in another
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with increased wages and more favourable treatment.
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, the consequences could be quite different to their expectations. Occasionally, adapting to a new
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and their culture and habits could be challenging, even ,more if the local people do not welcome you and treat you disrespectfully since you are from another
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and they see you differently.
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, there are people who state that immigrants are taking jobs away from national citizens.
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, a positive point of the result of
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could be an enhancement of their lives, after a time of adapting to the new place and finding a good job position with a considerable salary. To summarise,
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is an important fact in our society, it could be caused by terrible situations in their home countries and as a
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there could be some negatives like a difficult adaptation and other positives like upgrading your life conditions.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Economic migration
  • Asylum seeker
  • Diaspora
  • Expatriate
  • Refugee status
  • Work permit/visa
  • Demographic shift
  • Naturalization
  • Xenophobia
  • Cultural assimilation
  • Multiculturalism
  • Social cohesion
  • Immigration policies
  • Border control
  • Undocumented immigrants
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