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Many goverments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people, however think that other tpes of progress are equally important for a countr. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

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Governments often address their economic performance to their people, It has always been publicly recognized as a measurement of how effective their governance is.
On the other hand
, some believe that social equality is more significant than economic output in terms of determining social well-being.
This
 essay will discuss both views and illustrate why social equality
outweigh
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 sheer economic development.
To begin
 with, the economy of a society is about how much capital it can generate.
For example
, the
American
 economy stands
on
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 the top of other
nations's
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economy
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economies
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 as it produces the most value of products.
American
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 government has been prioritizing
the
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economic development over other sectors since the end of World War II. The nation
evantually
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eventually
 attained its economic goal of being a superpower and has maintained it for a long period of time.
However
, the recent national happiness index has indicated that average
American
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 are not content despite
American
 hegemonic economic power.
This
 leads us to
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of
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whether governments should make economic development their most important goal if
its
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 own citizen
are
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 not satisfied with their living condition.
For
this
 reason, researchers
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 able to examine other factors affecting individual contentment based on the national happiness index. These factors
are consisted
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 of social security, wealth distribution and healthcare, and the
coutry
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country
 which has the highest score on them turns out to be Sweden.
To conclude
, economic performance indeed is
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