in the future all cars, buses and truncks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?

Because
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technology has improved nowadays, we may not have to drive in the near future, there will be many Robert or automatic machines for us to use. I agree that
driverless
will bring many benefits
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our life and I will express my opinion in
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essay. On one hand, the elder population of many developed countries
such
as Japan, and most of
north
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European countries. When
people
get old, it is hard to react if there is an accident happening in a second. Fortunately, we have a new
innovation
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product to help those
people
to drive safely.
For instance
, in Swesiland, there are many tourist spots
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already used automatic machines to drive visitors from place A to place B.
Therefore
, it is
also
convenient for
people
to take it, the company of the
machine
has set the introductions of the
transportations
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especially
big
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cities which makes
people
understand the usage of the
machine
.
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the other hand, there are
also
drawbacks
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driverless
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situation
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.
For example
, if
people
run into trouble
such
as an accident or the
machine
does not work, it could be hard to deal with the problems or find
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first aid by themselves.
Besides
, once the
machine
is going wrong and shunt down directly, the passengers may
also
be
stunk
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inside. In conclusion, even though there are many drawbacks, I still believe that
driverless
will help the whole society
because
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the demand of human
being
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. The
technology
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improvement will
also
make the
driverless
system correct itself to make
machine
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get stable and safe.
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