in the future all cars, buses and truncks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?

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technology has improved nowadays, we may not have to drive in the near future, there will be many Robert or automatic machines for us to use. I agree that

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will bring many benefits

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European countries. When

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get old, it is hard to react if there is an accident happening in a second. Fortunately, we have a new

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product to help those

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to drive safely.

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already used automatic machines to drive visitors from place A to place B.

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cities which makes

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first aid by themselves.

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is going wrong and shunt down directly, the passengers may

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inside. In conclusion, even though there are many drawbacks, I still believe that

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will help the whole society

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improvement will

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make the

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system correct itself to make

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get stable and safe.

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in the future all cars, buses and truncks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?

Title :Many manufactured food and drink products contain high levels of sugars which causes many health problems. Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar. Do you agree or disagree?

Many people believe that the government should allocate more funding to the arts, such as music, painting, and theatre. Others argue that this money should be spent on more essential sectors like healthcare, education, and infrastructure. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some people think that the range of technology currently available is increasing the gap between rich people and poor people. Others think that it is causing the opposite effect. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

As the number of cars increases, more money has to be spent on road systems. Some people think the government should pay for this. Others, however, think that drivers should cover the costs.

Many young people do not know how to manage their money when graduating high school. What do you think are the reasons? What can be done to teach them this important skill?