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ou and your family are living in rented accommodation in an English speaking country. You are not satisfied with the condition of some of the furniture. Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter introduce yourself explain what is wrong with the furniture say what action you would like the landlord to take You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear ................., You should write at least 150 words. Writing task 1Show more

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Dear Sir/ Madam I am writing
this
 letter to express my concern about some of the furniture that we are using in the
apartment
. I have just moved in recently and rented your
apartment
 with my family. We were quite happy with
condition
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the condition
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 of the
apartment
as well as
location
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the location
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 which is near
to
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apply
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the city
center
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centre
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.
However
, we just found out the couch in the living room
are
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is
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 too old to use for a family. Its
color
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colour
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 is faded away and the cover of
material
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the material
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are
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is
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 torn apart. Some of the chairs in the kitchen are
also
 broken.
This
 is
uncomfortable
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an uncomfortable
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 situation for us as
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the couch
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couch
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couches
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 and chairs are
primary
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the primary
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 furniture of the
apartment
. We would like you to come and see the furniture and replace
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it to
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to
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with
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 new ones if possible. I am available in the
apartment
 every day after 6pm. I look forward to seeing you soon. Sobitkhon
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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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