You and your family are living in rented accommodation in an English speaking country. You are not satisfied with the condition of some of the furniture. Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter introduce yourself explain what is wrong with the furniture say what action you would like the landlord to take You do NOT need to write any addresses.

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Dear sir or madam, I am resident of B7 flat in your apartment located in queen street. As we newly

tranferred

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transferred

this

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country we had taken

fully

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a fully

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furnished house in your building.The reason for

letter

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is to inform

about

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you about

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the furniture in my house. I feel

more happy

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if you consider

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request. In our

home

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,home

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there

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are

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two beds,

sofa

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a sofa

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dining

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a dining

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table,

chairs

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and chairs

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which are in good condition when we entered

into

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the house. But, now

these furniture

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this furniture

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is getting destructed. My

beds

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bed

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in the

bed room

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bedroom

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was

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were

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spoiled and

table

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the table

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chairs got broken. As of now,

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was trying to fix it they are not fit for

the

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long time and breaking in a short span.

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, sofa cushions are

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got damaged.

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am very

thankfull

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thankful

if you look at these problems and replace

a good furniture

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good furniture

a piece of good furniture

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in place of old things and I think

that is

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the only action to be taken for

this

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situation to feel more

convinient

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convenient

stay

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in your residence. thanking you, yours sincerely,

sowjanya

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sow any

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

173 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

Dear
I am writing to express my dissatisfaction
regarding
the condition
furniture
belongings
for instance
damaged
broken
worn-out
appliance
household items
it is unacceptable
inconvenient
inhabitable
affecting
negatively
urgent attention
replacement
repair
resolve
maintenance
prompt response
Thank you for your attention
Yours sincerely

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