You and your family are living in rented accommodation in an English speaking country. You are not satisfied with the condition of some of the furniture. Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter introduce yourself explain what is wrong with the furniture say what action you would like the landlord to take You do NOT need to write any addresses.
Dear sir or madam,
I am resident of B7 flat in your apartment located in queen street. As we newly
tranferred
to Correct your spelling
transferred
this
country we had taken fully
furnished house in your building.The reason for Add an article
a fully
the fully
letter
is to inform Add an article
the letter
about
the furniture in my house. I feel Correct pronoun usage
you about
more happy
if you consider Replace the words
happier
this
request.
In our home
there Add a comma
,home
is
two beds, Correct subject-verb agreement
are
sofa
, Correct article usage
a sofa
dining
table, Correct article usage
a dining
chairs
which are in good condition when we entered Correct word choice
and chairs
into
the house. But, now Change preposition
apply
these furniture
is getting destructed. My Change the determiner
this furniture
beds
in the Fix the agreement mistake
bed
bed room
Correct your spelling
bedroom
was
spoiled and Change the verb form
were
table
chairs got broken. As of now, Correct article usage
the table
i
was trying to fix it they are not fit for Change the capitalization
I
the
long time and breaking in a short span. Change the article
a
Moreover
, sofa cushions are also
got damaged.
i
am very Change the capitalization
I
thankfull
if you look at these problems and replace Correct your spelling
thankful
a good furniture
in place of old things and I think Remove the article
good furniture
a piece of good furniture
an item of good furniture
that is
the only action to be taken for this
situation to feel more convinient
Correct your spelling
convenient
stay
in your residence.
thanking you,
yours sincerely,
Fix the infinitive
to stay
sowjanya
.Correct your spelling
sow any
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