You and your family are living in rented accommodation in an English speaking country. You are not satisfied with the condition of some of the furniture. Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter introduce yourself explain what is wrong with the furniture say what action you would like the landlord to take You do NOT need to write any addresses.

Dear sir or madam, I am resident of B7 flat in your apartment located in queen street. As we newly
tranferred
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transferred
to
this
country we had taken
fully
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a fully
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furnished house in your building.The reason for
letter
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is to inform
about
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you about
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the furniture in my house. I feel
more happy
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if you consider
this
request. In our
home
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there
is
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are
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two beds,
sofa
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a sofa
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,
dining
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a dining
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table,
chairs
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and chairs
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which are in good condition when we entered
into
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apply
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the house. But, now
these furniture
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this furniture
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is getting destructed. My
beds
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bed
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in the
bed room
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bedroom
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was
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were
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spoiled and
table
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the table
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chairs got broken. As of now,
i
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I
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was trying to fix it they are not fit for
the
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a
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long time and breaking in a short span.
Moreover
, sofa cushions are
also
got damaged.
i
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I
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am very
thankfull
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thankful
if you look at these problems and replace
a good furniture
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good furniture
a piece of good furniture
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in place of old things and I think
that is
the only action to be taken for
this
situation to feel more
convinient
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convenient
stay
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to stay
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in your residence. thanking you, yours sincerely,
sowjanya
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sow any
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Dear
  • I am writing to express my dissatisfaction
  • regarding
  • the condition
  • furniture
  • belongings
  • for instance
  • damaged
  • broken
  • worn-out
  • appliance
  • household items
  • it is unacceptable
  • inconvenient
  • inhabitable
  • affecting
  • negatively
  • urgent attention
  • replacement
  • repair
  • resolve
  • maintenance
  • prompt response
  • Thank you for your attention
  • Yours sincerely
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