You would like to participate in a work-related seminar in another country. Write a letter to the person in charge of the seminar and ask for detailed information regarding the dates, program, accommodation and cost.

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Dear Sir or Madam, I hope you are doing well. I am pleased to inform you that I want to register for the seminar on AWS services through the company website which is held in London, England. I was trying to find the additional details

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the website, but it says to send a letter for the same. I wanted to know if you could please share the event date, address and the list of programs

along with

the timings, or if you can provide the brochure for the event.

In addition

, it would be really helpful if there is any transportation arrangement from the airport. I would

also

like to know the type of accommodation, shared houses or individual villas etc.

Moreover

, requesting you to

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share the charges based on each category. It will be easier for me if I know the cost in advance to avoid any future inconvenience. I will be highly obliged if you could share the details at the earliest. Yours sincerely, Trilochan

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