Some people think that it is beneficial for children to do paid work, while others think it can be harmful for children. What are the advantages and disadvantages of children doing paid work?

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In some households,
children
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get paid for
work
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,
while
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others do not.
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essay will evaluate the benefits and drawbacks of
children
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getting compensated for doing chores. One of the main
advantage
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of doing paid
work
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is learning about the concept of
money
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. Most often,
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lesson is not taught at school. When
children
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received
money
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from
work
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, they could learn the lesson of saving and spending. They might be more aware of the value of
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and understand the idea that
money
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does not come easily. Another benefit of working is for
children
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to learn skills that they would not be exposed to
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.
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,
children
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could learn social skills by working in a shop and interacting with customers. There is a lot to be learnt outside of classroom settings. On the
otherhand
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other hand
, there are disadvantages to paid
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. One drawback is removing precious time from
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the play
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of the
children
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. At a young age, some parents think that it is imperative for
children
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to explore and play in an unstructured and free environment.
Work
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can be saved for later on in their lives.
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, some parents believe that
children
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should not be incentivised to
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for
money
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. They want to teach their
children
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to
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for a cause, for
self improvement
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,
instead
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of for
money
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reward
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. Through being paid at
work
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,
children
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understand the relationship
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hardwork
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hard work
and compensation, even though the time could be spent on other areas. In my opinion, as long as the
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is balanced with school
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and free play, there is a lot to be learnt from working at a young age.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • beneficial
  • harmful
  • advantages
  • disadvantages
  • financial independence
  • responsibility
  • valuable skills
  • impact
  • education
  • exploitation
  • negative effects
  • social life
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