Some people think that it is beneficial for children to do paid work, while others think it can be harmful for children. What are the advantages and disadvantages of children doing paid work?

In some households,

children

get paid for

work

,

while

others do not.

This

essay will evaluate the benefits and drawbacks of

children

getting compensated for doing chores. One of the main

advantage

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of doing paid

work

is learning about the concept of

money

. Most often,

this

lesson is not taught at school. When

children

received

money

from

work

, they could learn the lesson of saving and spending. They might be more aware of the value of

money

and understand the idea that

money

does not come easily. Another benefit of working is for

children

to learn skills that they would not be exposed to

otherwise

.

For instance

,

children

could learn social skills by working in a shop and interacting with customers. There is a lot to be learnt outside of classroom settings. On the

otherhand

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other hand

, there are disadvantages to paid

work

. One drawback is removing precious time from

play

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the play

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of the

children

. At a young age, some parents think that it is imperative for

children

to explore and play in an unstructured and free environment.

Work

can be saved for later on in their lives.

Moreover

, some parents believe that

children

should not be incentivised to

work

for

money

. They want to teach their

children

to

work

for a cause, for

self improvement

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,

instead

of for

money

reward

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. Through being paid at

work

,

children

understand the relationship

of

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between

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hardwork

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hard work

and compensation, even though the time could be spent on other areas. In my opinion, as long as the

work

is balanced with school

work

and free play, there is a lot to be learnt from working at a young age.